Fiction, make-believe
Monsters of modern folklore –
Mortal’s amusement.
You’re the one I love –
You’re the one I should not love
and yet we collide.
Adrift by nature
the lightness of this dispute –
Affection begins.
Lying next to you
Here in the world of darkness
My arms felt no warmth.
Fire and ice maybe
my flame goes like a meteor –
Unto your coldness.
Cold-hands take the heat
your grey eyes suddenly changed –
Watching it go green.
In a ring of whiff –
The scent of the cold-blooded
they’re here, they’re closer.
As the tension flood
these lightened candles around –
They suddenly died.
Hell against heaven
We are expecting no hope
Destiny’s cruel.
And then it struck me
for the first time I felt cold
it’s my fate, don’t cry.
Monsters of modern folklore –
Mortal’s amusement.
You’re the one I love –
You’re the one I should not love
and yet we collide.
Adrift by nature
the lightness of this dispute –
Affection begins.
Lying next to you
Here in the world of darkness
My arms felt no warmth.
Fire and ice maybe
my flame goes like a meteor –
Unto your coldness.
Cold-hands take the heat
your grey eyes suddenly changed –
Watching it go green.
In a ring of whiff –
The scent of the cold-blooded
they’re here, they’re closer.
As the tension flood
these lightened candles around –
They suddenly died.
Hell against heaven
We are expecting no hope
Destiny’s cruel.
And then it struck me
for the first time I felt cold
it’s my fate, don’t cry.
A winner for me!
ReplyDeleteKapag ang kwentista ang sumubok tumula, iba ang hagod ng mga linya. Hitik sa drama, at talagang nag-uumapaw ang emosyon. Gusto ko yung ginawang symbology ng fire and ice sa tula bilang paglalarawan sa nagbabangayang emosyon o feeling ng init at panlalamig kapag tayo'y umiibig.
Keep Writing!